GreenShark4's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elfire - Suck]

The epitome of awesome

And I love the secret messages you put into your songs. I'm guessing this one is in reference to the zero bombers?

[Pattern #9]

lnnL

Well congrats, you now have a small underground following, and for good reason. I wish you good success in your future, and that a kick-ass album comes soon hinthint.

[Elfire - I Eat Kittens]

Hey, Me Too!

In fact, I'm kinda hungry now. I'm def playin' this at my next slauighterfest. Nice use of bass and synth. I love the vocal solo at 1:24 and 1:51, and the synth drop at 2:20 and 2:48.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have some baby cats to eat...

[Elfire - Bounce Automation]

This is great without vocals

But if some wubz were added, it could easily pass for dubstep. But, then again, that's not you, is it?

[L2D Horde]

CRAP

Did you master all of this? Great work! IwaskindawonderingifIcouldcoverinanex perimentalfashion?

Aslan-Emanuel responds:

I did everything you hear...digitally. I've just started using a real guitar, but I won't post any submissions of it until I have some and I finish posting all my digital ones. Can you cover this? Yes. I'll try to tab it if you need it. But, don't ask me to recreate it, since my harddrive died, and I'm not wanting to...anyways, yeah. I'm lazy. The end.

Hope to hear your cover soon. (P.S. I sent this in a PM, too.)

[Cosmic Prolapse]

Nice Song for a Rainy Day

This is a pretty good track, but might I suggest a bit of precussion or some static bits. It's fine the way it is, though.

ShatterTheSky22 responds:

Yeah, I think especially some static bits would have worked well in here. Especially with the heavy distortion already there. Thanks for the score and review! ^__^

[TSR Audio]

[The Machines <Finished>]

A little advice...

Maybe on the piano bit, have some sort of vocals, not nessecarily singing. Also, the last synth breakdown could be replaced with some melodic static and a bit of synth.

DJ-Fr0stbite responds:

yeah i was thinking of adding some sort of choir the the background of the piano part. thanks for the advice :)

<DJ- Fr0stbite>

[B L A C K L I G H T]

Amazing

I see some Trent Reznor and possibly some classic rock inspiration. Nice track, and good use of lo-fi.

LupeGarcon responds:

Not really a fan of Reznor. But if you like it then say whatever you like.

[Vermin]

MY FUCKING EARS!!!

Nice track. The only thing is it seems to be missing something. I can't quite put my finger on it. It just feels like every other industrial stomp-your-boots hardcore song. This is definatley a download, though (I'll have to adjust volume in iTunes, haha }] )

[CV: Pulse (Demo)]

Nice

Funny how the so called 'industrial' artists here haven't even heard of rivethead. Hoorah?
Anyway, nice song. I'd suggest maybe cutting down on the intro and lengthening, but other than that, it's pretty bitchin'.

CognitionVault responds:

Haha, yeah. 40 seconds is pretty long for a static intro. We're aiming for making this around 6 minutes, so we've still got lots of work to do. We've got to kick out the kinks, master it, smooth out transitions, add a backing synth, bass, and lead guitar. This project is massive, and we love how it's progressing. Thanks for the suuggestions. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

P.S. This is Brian. I'm a rivethead, though people mistake me for goth. >:D
EDIT: This is Tino. I run around in gas masks and doesn't afraid of anything.